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Friday, 7 June 2019

Tunnel


Lily was walking in the forest around 6:00 pm.  It was getting late and dark very quickly.
6 hours went by and Lily could not see anything.  Until she came across a big round tunnel. She glared inside and saw nothing but pitch black. She says a “Hello?”  and it echoes down the tunnel. She walks in and there is a tiny point of moon light that shows a body of some sort.  She gets a little closer and It jumps up and gets pulled back. She carries on down the tunnel and finds dead bodies along the way.  She come to a room with 4 tunnels. She chooses one and walks down it. She soon finds that there is a monster waiting for her and it saw her.  She tried to run but she couldn’t run fast enough. The monster caught up and starting feasting on her body while she was still alive.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! That is really gross......but I LOVE your descriptive writing. It made me want to read more. I'm really proud of this Noah x

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