Twas the night before Christmas. The lonely man was celebrating Christmas by himself. He lived by a lake. Quite a big one. He has been swimming once before and he glimpsed an immense fish that looked like a monster. He vowed never to go swimming again. Until now. He wanted to break the vow and overtake his fears of creatures. He was going to be brave. He changed into his wet suit and grabbed a harpoon gun. He faltered onto the balcony and sprung into the water before you know it he had spotted the creature. It swam towards him and he fired the gun. The creature swam down. He jumped out of the water and climbed his way to his balcony. But.. The creature jumped out of the water and dragged him under ...To be continued.
Blood is everywhere. The clear blue sparkly water turns into red murky blood. The scent of blood attracts more and more creatures. The man screams in pain and screams for help. But no one can hear him under the water. A Mosasaurus comes out of nowhere and eats everything.
Noah your story was interesting but can you fix this story it annoying to scroll to the side but all and all its a cool story
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