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Monday, 4 March 2019

Poems

Kitchen:

I can taste the food that heaps into my mouth.

I can smell the delicious foods in the room.

I can feel the warm sticky food in front of me.

I can hear the microwave as at vvvrroommms its way to heat up something.

I can see the beautiful kitchen.


Beach:

I can taste the salt of the salty ocean.

I can smell the salty water of the big blue ocean that calms me.

I can feel the warm crunchy sand on my feet.

I can hear the ginormous waves collapsing on one another.

I can see the blue calming water.


Bedroom:

I can taste the air that is breezing through the door.

I can smell my clean sheets on my bed.

I can see my drawers and my wardrobe when I lay on my comfy bed.

I can feel my comfy bed.

I can hear my music playing very loud.


Special Place to me:

I can taste the fresh water when I go under the water.

I can smell the fresh water as I jump in my boat.

I can see my teammates and the opposite team when I'm in the water.

I can feel the interior of the boat and my paddle.

I can hear the splashing of the fresh green water.


1 comment:

  1. I love your poems. It made me feel like I was there tasting, smelling, seeing, feeling and hearing all those different things. I'm glad your sheets on your bed smelt fresh x

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