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Wednesday 4 December 2019

SLJ Teaser Week - Day 3 - Activity 3


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  1. Kia Ora Noah,

    You’ve done a tremendous job on this blog post. Your dad sounds like a wonderful and positive impact on your life! I like how you've summarised him in a few sentences and then used adjectives to further explain how he has influenced you. It is very clever. I also like the graphic you have used. It is a very creative way to deliver information interestingly. What are some of the things he has taught you specifically?

    My dad is also a bit of a racer. He likes motorbikes and jetboats and anything fast really. I really like jet boating with him, he’s actually teaching me how to race in his boat. What sort of racing does your dad do?

    Did you consider including more images to enhance your post? Here are some tips for making eye catching blog posts if you need some inspiration.

    Hei konā mai,
    Shannon

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