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Tuesday, 3 December 2019

SLJ Teaser Week 1 - Pepeha


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  1. Shannon at the SLJ Team5 December 2019 at 12:41

    Kia Ora Noah, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really like your Pepeha. It is very informative and you’ve chosen a lovely, clear and easy-to-read font. I see your river is the Manawatu River. Do you go there often? What do you do there? I hear its a good spot to go for a swim. I love swimming, particularly doing flips in the water. I’m better at backflips than frontflips, but neither compare to my handstand abilities. Can you do any tricks in the water?

    Did you consider including an image of your maunga or awa to your Pepeha?

    Hei konā mai,
    Shannon

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